Thursday, 15 September 2011

Excerpt from a lesson aug 22 2011

i'll just show the funny bits!!!

I screamed and put on a burst of speed!!! ...   the bridge jerked to the left and nearly threw me of my feet!!!. ..   I whispered to my brother "walk slow!!" ....   "yippee"!!!!

1 comment:

  1. I assume this is from an older story you found in your writing book. Could you post some information on what the story was about and when you wrote it?

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